Fiction Friday: Micropoetry from the Book

I asked my dead father,
who lived I knew not where,
to forgive me,
even as I’d never asked for David’s,
for not once had I ever sinned against him.

My pain was swallowed up in the light of his presence,
the sting of the death of Mother’s memory, gone—
all because of the light of his love.

I’d seen what I’d been allowed to see,
heard what I’d been allowed to hear.
The artist in David had painted a pretty picture,
the pianist, in Mother,
this score that had underscored the strange play
that was my life—
a life that had been a Hallmark greeting card,
personalized in cursive,
tea-stained at the edges,
protected in a pretty envelope.

The Protestants had “True Love Waits” rings,
the Mormons, CTR, for “Choose the Right.”
They were purity rings, & nothing more.

Purity rings & purity balls,
with chastity placed on a girl’s
uncovered shoulders.
Orgasms were something mysterious—
something experienced,
often by the inexperienced.

Book Review: Father’s Arcane Daughter

51SHCAT1RTL._SX313_BO1,204,203,200_

Years ago, I watched the made-for-TV movie, Caroline?, based on this book. As it was one of the few Hallmark productions that left an impression on me, I figured the book had to be exceptional.

Though the book had a memorable title (i.e. the original title, not the renaming), it was also quite short (I read it in a few hours), so I guess there wasn’t enough time to develop the characters of Winston and Heidi’s/Hilary’s parents. (There was much more character development in the movie.)

The book was set in 1952, and I would’ve appreciated more time and place details. We are told the year, but not shown it; we are told it happened in Pittsburgh, but not shown enough of it. The lack of sensory details in this book is jarring, making it seem more dreamlike than real. I felt more like a casual observer than a reader getting to know the characters.

Father’s Arcane Daughter would’ve been much better without the present-day chapter prologues, which were intentionally vague. The bits about the comic strip were lost on me (akin to an inside joke), and the fact that Heidi/Hilary was never specifically diagnosed only added to the unevenness of the story. I appreciate specific details in a book. If someone dies from cancer, I want to know what kind; if a child is developmentally-delayed, I want to know how. (Abstract doesn’t do it for me.)

The epilogue, however irregular in its choice of narrator, worked, and made me wonder how many other people felt the same way the narrator did. Though I rarely say this, I believe this book would’ve been much better if Konigsburg had done what I call a “Picoult” (a la Jodi) and written it from multiple points-of-view—those whose lives Caroline touched.

I’ve never been a fan of stories about children who sound like adults, which was how it was in Winston’s (the primary narrator’s) case, though I attributed his maturity to his affluent upbringing and having to be his sister’s caretaker. However, the letters Winston wrote to various individuals and companies added a bit of humor and insight into his character; I wouldn’t have minded more of those letters.

The idea of a deeper secret between Caroline and her father was an interesting angle, and I can’t help but wonder what kind of woman—this latter-day lady in white—she was to give up what she did for the sake of a pubescent boy (I assumed Winston was around the bar mitzvah age). Perhaps that is the real mystery, not “Is she, or isn’t she?”

Though I was left wanting so much more—not necessarily more words, but just more—I will read more of Ms. Konigsburg’s books in the future.

 

Writer’s Digest November Poem-a-Day 2017 Challenge #26. Theme: Shine

5.JPG

My daughter’s first Christmas.  When my husband saw her under the tree, he said, “No regifting.”

The Light That Draws You

The light-up ladybug that paints the crescent moon and stars on your ceiling—
that is the light that draws you.

The sunshine that plays tricks on mirrors and turns your hair strawberry blond—
that is the light that draws you.

The silver moonshine that filters through your golden curtains—
that is the light that draws you.

The little church ornament with a choir that sings and stained glass that lights up,
that is the light that draws you.

The star on the Christmas tree that changes colors like you change your mind—
that is the light that draws you.

The pink lightbulb that shines inside our burgundy beaded lampshade—
that is the light that draws you.

The fire from the grill, from where meaty deliciousness smells—
that is the light that draws you.

The candlelight I read by when alone in bed or dining al fresco on the patio—
that is the light that draws you.

The lights in the stores, like a Hallmark movie set,
the lights of downtown shimmering on the sidewalk after a mid-winter drizzle,
the amber, afternoon glow—that last breath before twilight,
but most of all,
the light I see in your eyes when awareness shines—
those are the lights that draw me.

http://www.writersdigest.com/whats-new/2017-november-pad-chapbook-challenge-day-26